In the article,
“An Architect’s Guide to Building with Bamboo”, Vadot, (n.d) states that bamboo
is a reliable and sustainable future construction material. The author
also referenced permaculture expert Mr Alejandro Chellet, who emphasizes
bamboo as a future innovation and its uses in his workshops across
countries to bring awareness about bamboo structures. The author finds
that bamboo flourishes well across the world with little maintenance and grew
more near equator. He adds that it is best to harvest the bamboo between four
and six years so that it becomes construction-grade material, and often,
referred to as the steel’s alternative. Bamboo is naturally protected against
microorganisms from "cut close to its base" harvest method. The
author asserts that an incredibly lightweight material that can be used to
accomplish stable, weight-bearing structures cannot be overlook in
construction industry. Bamboo is lightweight, easy, and affordable to transport
and low cost when bought near the plantation. At the same time, Vadot
highlights that there is no standard design code for bamboo. While the author
focused on advantages, he should elaborate the advantages of the bamboo in
details and he should also highlight all the advantages and explains systematically.
First of all, the article is not very clearly describing about bamboo full
benefits, he just briefly explains bamboo strength and construction use. I felt
that Vadot’s article requires more description of bamboo’s strength with
concrete evidence and how it is used in construction industry, rather than given
few examples. There is no coherence in his explanation. In the article, “Environmental,
social and economic sustainability of bamboo and bamboo-based construction
materials in buildings” Rashmi, Kim and Kim (2 May 2019), has further given
explanations the features of bamboo, its workability strength and its actual
uses with examples and other authors
articles to support his explanation.
Secondly, Vadot
has mentions that it is hard to create standard code for 1200 species of
bamboo. In the article, “Bamboo based biocomposites material,
design and applications”, Suhaily et al. 2013 explains that
there are 1575 different species of bamboo and ranging from woody to bamboo
herd. Out all these, only 20-38 species are suitable for construction material.
I noticed that there is contradicting information in both articles. I doubt Vadot’s
credibility as he has not elaborated on the total number of bamboo species. Furthermore,
when he has least details about species rather, he just mentions in one line. I
felt that he has not lack of supporting information with verification that weigh
down the article’s reputation.
Furthermore, Vadot
has mentions that bamboo helps to reduce carbon. However, there is no further
explanation to it and there is no clarity how bamboo helps environmentally. Bamboo benefits environmentally as it functions
as a material that helps to control the soil erosion, use as a wastewater treatment,
and absorb a huge amount of carbon dioxide. In the article “Environmental
Impact of Guadua Bamboo” Schröder (2012) has further given explanations on the
environment impact of bamboo by providing examples and statistics to support
his explanation.
Lastly, the author has mentions that the bamboo is naturally
protected against microorganisms. However, in the article “Studies on
dimensional stability, thermal degradation and termite resistant properties of
bamboo (Bambusa tulda Roxb.) treated with thermosetting resins”, Deka M, Das P
and Saikia C.N, explains that bamboo has to be treated to protect it from
termites that was supported by their experiments. Once again, there is a conflicting
information in both articles that overthrow the standing.
In a nutshell, bamboo has huge benefits not just
for construction and also to the environment. If Vadot explains all the qualities
and reinforce with evidence, his article would be well grounded.
References
Valot, C. (n.d). An Architect’s Guide to Building with Bambo. Architizer
https://architizer.com/blog/practice/details/how-to-bamboo/
Environmental, social and economic sustainability of bamboo and bamboo-based construction materials in buildings. Rashmi Manandhar, Jin-Hee Kim & Jun-Tae Kim, 02 May 2019.
https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/13467581.2019.1595629
Bamboo based biocomposites material, design and
applications.
Suhaily
et al. 2013.
Environmental Impact of
Guadua Bamboo. Stephane Schröder (2012).
Thank you, Saira, for the effort on this evolving essay's 2nd draft. You present a fairly comprehensive summary, for example. It needs some work in terms of language use, but that can be edited. You also express your opinion in thesis, which also needs polished in terms of focus. Your supporting body paragraphs connect fairly well to the thesis and are fairly well organized, and you have decent info from outside sources. Let's talk about this.
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ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments. I appreciate it and i will improve on my mistakes.
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Saira